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I Want You

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I Want You

Caress me,
Wrap your body 'round mine.
Kiss me gently,
So I can feel your lips one last time.

Before the night ends,
I don't want you to go.
My life now depends,
On the love that you show.

Hold me tight,
Make our hearts beat fast.
Let your heat be my pure delight,
And let this silence last.

Embrace my soul,
Intoxicate the air with your sweet scent.
Make me whole,
Linger on my skin and allow no repent.

All we need is this moment,
The rest of the world we can ignore.
To me you are so fragrant,
Each other we can explore.

If you'd just try…
Then maybe we'd get somewhere!
Until then I'll just ask why,
Why you don't seem to care.
-Wroxy Work
2012
I am actually quite proud of this piece, it captures what I have been feeling lately perfectly! Tell me what you think when you read this, is it good? How could I improve? Thank you to all of my great watchers and readers who inspire me still everyday to continue writing, I love you all! :heart:

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DaisyLover87's avatar
Good job with this! Very emotional and powerful.